What a terrible, terrible ending to what started out as a very
promising series. I really wanted to like this book, but it became an
utter slog fairly early on, and I had to force myself over the finish
line (more out of stubborness than anything; this is very rare that I
feel this way but I hate to abandon books that I've started). If I
hadn't read this on a Kindle, I would have been tempted to throw the
book across the room in frustration upon finishing it. I still might.
First,
some context about the series as a whole, before I get to my thoughts on this particular book. Heads up, 'cause it's about to get all SPOILER-y up in here.
I really enjoyed Revelation Space,
and thought it was an effective mixture of big ideas, with a
galaxy-spanning setting and an intriguing future history built up
throughout. The characterization was perhaps the weaker link, but the
protagonist was at least an interesting take on the stock "Arrogant
Bastard" archetype. It was extremely well-done space opera, and I was
excited to read more.
The second book, Redemption Ark,
picked up the conflicts established in the first book, along with some
of the characters, and all seemed to go well at first. However, in
retrospect some of the problems in the series started to show up about
halfway through this book, and the majority of it can be blamed squarely
on the writing and apparent (lack of) editing. Reynolds, for all of
his great ideas, can get extremely long winded, and these books tend to
disappear down rabbit-holes of lengthy exposition and really long
descriptive passages. Conversations abound, but some anticipated action
sequences are either glossed over or happen off-screen. For instance,
there's a big build-up towards the theft of an Ultra spaceship,
something that seems like it would be really fun to read about after
pages and pages of dialogue, whole chapters of dialogue, and then the
narrative skips forward to after the event, dismissing it with what
amounts to "...and so that happened". Reynolds can spend pages
describing the transformed corridors of the Nostalgia for Infinity, but breezes past a freakin' space battle? Feh.
Other
problems began to be apparent. There was the ham-fisted, shoehorned in
Khouri/Thorn, um, "romance". There was the sudden and
not-very-convincing one-eighty in Scorpio's outlook. Why spend so much
time on his backstory establishing him as this murderous, revenge-driven
badass, just to have him essentially shrug and become one of the good
guys? And the biggest sin was to have Volyova, a major character for
two books now, die offscreen. Granted, there was not a lot of character
depth there, but she had been a major protagonist, and there was a bit
of build-up to her sacrifice, but then we get another "...and then this
happened".
Still, the overall universe-building and Big Ideas that Reynolds was exploring gave me hope, and so I settled in to Absolution Gap, hoping for the best....
So,
where to start with this mess? SPOILERS AHOY as we go down the
checklist of woe; I'm not hiding 'em because if you've read this far
into a one-star review, then I assume you want it with both barrels.
Among the many, many problems:
- Important characters from the earlier books are killed off fairly
early on, and replaced with much less interesting ones. Clavian and
Skade both die together about a third of the way in (the actual deaths
happen, again, offscreen). Skade, in particular, suffered from an
increasingly muddy set of motivations which basically reduced her to a
caricature of moustace-twirling villiany. Scorpio essentially becomes a
much less compelling Clavian-Lite. Oh, by the way, Thorn, from the
last novel, dies in between books, and it happened, you guessed it,
off-screen.
- There are a bunch of new characters added here. The third book in a series (not counting
Chasm City in this) is a bit late to bring major players on board unless handled expertly, something which Reynolds...does not do.
- Worse, with the new characters and settings given so much
emphasis, there are some major plot threads and characters that were
much more interesting that are just abandoned and left unresolved. The
Mother Nest/Closed Council intrigue and the character of Felka from
Redemption Ark come to mind here. The Conjoiner political intrigue was
a major part of the first half of the second book, and here that whole
plot doesn't even get to fizzle out so much as it's just ignored.
-
The story draaaaaaaaaags, on not one but two fronts. The Hela and
Ararat plotlines really spin their wheels here for hundreds of pages.
There are many, many pointless excursions with minor characters and
setting details that pad the page count (a lot) but add nothing to a
compelling, forward-moving narrative.
- The antagonists this book
introduces, Quaiche and Grelier, die pointless, anticlimactic deaths.
Quaiche's in particular was ridiculous.
- Plothole alert: If the
Nostalgia for Infinity
has been in orbit around Hela for nine years, and has sensors which can
detect a mosquito fart from light years away, you're going to tell me
they didn't notice Quaiche building his holdfast down there right below
them? Presumably that whole endeavor took quite a bit of time and
energy.
And then, the ending. Dear gods above, the ending. Where to start? Again SPOILERS AHEAD:
- Okay, I get that the idea that the temptation to bargain with the
shadows was a test. If that's the case, Quaiche was going to destroy
the scrimshaw suit anyway, choosing to not deal with the shadows, even
if the heroes had never come to Hela. Does this then render the ENTIRE
COURSE OF ACTION the heroes undertook since leaving Ararat more or less
meaningless?
- Reynolds pulls one of the most blatant deus ex
machina endings I've ever seen with the 11th hour revelation of the
Nestbuilders, yet another ancient, all-powerful race, entering the
story. Yes, there were some VERY minor hints in retrospect, but it's
basically as if they came out of nowhere.
- The deus ex machina
gets worse. After a couple thousand pages of series, the entire
human-Inhibitor conflict, the ostensible conflict driving the last two
books and forming the backdrop of the first, comes to an end....as it's
basically GLOSSED OVER, occurring offscreen (sonofabitch!), described
after the fact in a freakin' EPILOGUE! "And so this happened..."
My gods, why did I spend so much time reading this? It has been a
long, long time since I've been so, so thoroughly annoyed and
disappointed with a book, a long time since I've invested so much time
in a series which crashed and burned so craptacurlary. is that a word?
It is now. To paraphrase Roger Ebert, I hated, hated, hated this book.
So, ratings:
-
Revelation Space: 4 stars. Great ideas, matched by a compelling story. Read this, then pretend the rest never happened.
-
Redepmtion Ark: 3 stars. The cracks are starting to show.
-
Absolution Gap:
1 stars (really, should be zero stars, but the series started out so
well), retroactively ruined the series, and causes me to swear to never,
ever read anything by this author again.